This week in writing we have been making another comic using Pixton (Click Here For Link) To make a TV show about a truth or a lie! I chose to name the show Is It True? Its a game where the guest (Me) tell the audience (You) a Truth about me and a Lie about me, Can Y O U figure out the Truth And The Lie!? I thing I found challenging is always moving around the faces and their body/ movements.
Each week we do a new comic or learn a new way to make our writing better!
!!CHALLENGE!! Maybe you guys can maybe spot out what has changed from my Bucket List comic, and my Is It True!? Comic! Comment what you think is the Lie And The Truth!
Heres my comic! Remember... Choose carefully, Whats the Truth! And whats the Lie! ALSO P.S put WHY you think its the lie, and why its the truth!
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, May 1, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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WOW! Ella-Pearl, fantastic listening today in writing about what makes a quality blog post, ka pai! I love the personal voice you've put into your blurb, it definitely caught my attention and made me read on to find out more! I think that you DON'T like eating octopus, horse and eels (because in NZ it's very uncommon to eat horses).
ReplyDeleteMiss McLeod
Hi Miss McLeod. I will not tell you if you are right or not here but i will email you your answer! Thank you for reading ALL of my blurb and actually saying WHY you think its the lie! Thanks!
DeleteElla-Pearl
What an awesome job on your comic Ella-Pearl! I love how you have made the people move and look like they are interacting. I think that the lie is you DID scream on the Fear Fall ride at Rainbows End. That is a scary ride! I am gong to have a look at your other comic now to see what has changed. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteRachael Kavermann
Hi Rachel! Im Ella-Pearl, Thanks for commenting on my blog! I will NOT Tell you if its the truth! BUT I want to thank you for saying that you think my blog post is cool! You should maybe do a comic on Pixton!
DeleteKia ora Ella-Pearl,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic quality blog post. I love the way your introduction explains the task and has a link to where you made the comic, ka pai! I also really like in the comic how you have thought about what the characters are doing, the pink high five is a great touch.
I think that your lie is that you like to eat horse, eels and octopus... I know some people are really into these foods, but horse meat isn't traditionally something we eat in New Zealand. If I think that's the lie, it means you must have been super brave on the fare fall! I screamed my lungs out!!!
I look forward to knowing what the truth really is!
-Miss Morgan
Hi Miss Morgan
DeleteThanks for commenting!Ill say your answer was RIGHT! :D Well done!! Thank you for also telling me why you think its the lie :) Im exicted to see what other blog post you comment on! :)
- Ella-Pearl